
Hermit Crab: My sister in law took my Son to Pebble Beach – Carmel to check out the 17 mile drive and he
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Hermit_crabs_scavenge_at_Gumboot_chiton_2.jpg
If anyone can give me advice and let me know what type of hermit crab my son found that would be great!

could any body help me identify a amphibian fossil that my daughter found on a yorkshire beach.?
you can clearly see the head,eyes, front leg with a webbed foot and ribs.
there is also gill looking feature beneath the mouth.under a microscope i can see what appears to be a spine set in the reverse of the pebble looks like a wing ? and the rear part of the object looks like there has been something detached poss rear leg wings etc.
this is a remarkable image and sets its self above the surface of the rock/pebble and almost 3d image it has a iguana looking face maybe wrong i have some good images i could send if any one could give me any information on the strange creature this will be a great help to my daughter and myself thank-you sharon.

Could someone please rate my beach description? – for a GCSE english exam.?
July 2nd. The sun shone down making the silky sand glisten. Gracefully washing in and out, the sea dragged the swirled shells and perfectly moulded pebbles back to the water. Children scurried away from frustrated parents, giggling and splashing the salty water as the adults tried to restrain their boisterous children.
Contentedly chatting, a group of women perched on grubby deck chair, mesmerized by the gurgling baby girl peering up at them through glossy brown eyes. Beaming and kicking her stubby legs, she basked in their attention as they gazed down in admiration.
Aromas wafted from the cafes and restraunts, drawing people inside like bees to a honey pot. In the distance, the tinkling song of an ice cream van could be heard. Swarms of children raced to join the back of the bustling queue. Flustered mothers growled as their children pointed to the assorted ice lollies displayed tantalizingly in the van window.
“Mummy! Mummy! Ice creaaam!” demanded the red-faced toddler. He gazed pleadingly up at his reluctant mother. Smothered head to toe in sun cream, his bare arms and legs were covered in uneven patches of sand.
Hello, I am writing a book, can you read a bit and tell me what you like?
Claire was a small girl, her arms were small and here head was small. She was very small of a girl. Her friend named Jerry was a small guy as well. They were both small like a pebble you would find lying on the beach. Jerry one day decided he had to ask Claire out on a date. They were friends for a long time now and Jerry wanted to date her.
It was the last period in school that day, Jerry went up to Claire and stared into her blue eyes.
“You like me Claire-Bear right?” Jerry asked sweetly.
Claire looked away.
“Would you go out with me tonight?” Jerry asked.
Claire scowled and swiftly kicked Jerry between his legs. Claire flinched and then turned away like a professional boxer who just lost a fight. Jerry collapsed the the floor and started sputtering in pain.
Claire got home that same day and told her mom what had happened, her mom….
NOT FINISHED
Okay, it is okay to use small in the first sentence three times for the effect of repetition, but then you use it three times after. Change it to words like ‘petite’, ‘little’, or ‘she had dainty’ features
In the first sentence it should be ‘her’ not ‘here’
Are they really that small? Like a pebble?
The rest of it, well would you kick a guy who you were friends with just because he asked you out, and something you’d tell your mum and make a big deal out of it
I really like this part:
Claire scowled and swiftly kicked Jerry between his legs. Claire flinched and then turned away like a professional boxer who just lost a fight. Jerry collapsed the the floor and started sputtering in pain.
But you can expand it more
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The use of descriptive verbs and adjectives shows that you can be imaginative when you want to, but I think you need to think about what you are writing more and slow your story down. Good luck!
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…Meh…
I don’t understand what you mean by “small”. Small as in short, small as in young, literally the size of a pebble…I think you need to clarify there. The rest is pretty good, but could use some more expanding. It happened pretty quickly. I agree with Just Like That.
hmm it doesn’t entirely make sense.
you over-emphasise the fact that she is small.
this part is not a proper sentence “she was very small of a girl” I take it English is not your first language? It should be “She was a very small girl” but to be honest, just say she’s small once and leave it at that.
It skips big chunks in a way that doesn’t follow.
please answer mine
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100321161957AA7eCJv