Has Jimmy Carter (Democrat) gone off the deep end?
to blame America saying America should have subsidized
and backed Hamas…affirms Carter has “gone off the deep
end”. This terror group sends pregnant woman to blow up
hospitals in Israel. The Carter Center in Atlanta is said to
already be receiving significant support and resources from
Muslim governments in the Middle East. Interesting??
Help with story……?
I was standing outside on the cold summer night. How can my family just bail? I sat down on the dirty cement ground and cried and cried and cried. Why did this have to happen to me? What did I do wrong? I should’ve broken the fight. But I was acting like a coward. Then I heard a car engine. Who was that? Was it Ronnie? No she wouldn’t come back. It was Henry, at least that’s what I hoped. But it wasn’t Henry; it was some truck I never saw. It came towards me with full speed. I followed my instincts and ran towards the house. Then two big men come out towards me.
“We had enough of you Ronnie, you need to come with us now,” one of them called out to me. They smell bad like cigarettes. And look bad too. It’s like their hoboes.
“I… I’m not Ronnie,” I sputtered. “I’m her twin sister Carter.” How can they mistake me as her?
“Don’t try that on us again. We know you Ronnie and that’s the first thing you would’ve said. Now come inside the truck,” the second guy said.
“I’m telling you I am not Veronica. I am Carter. Whatever she did I didn’t,” I told them once again. I tried to get inside my house as fast as I can but they were faster than me.
“Going somewhere?” The second guy asked. He smiled a mischievous smile with his yellow teeth. He had a couple of them missing.
I tried to stay calm and took a deep breath. Then I exhaled. “Yes, I want to go inside of my home,” I told toothy. I tried to get passed him but he put out his foot.
“Sorry, but I can’t let that happen. Now just walk to the truck or Rick and I will escort you to it,” toothy responded.
“And your name is?” I asked. I need to stall enough time for me to come up with a plan, a plan to get me out of this mess as well as Ronnie.
“Don’t play dumb, it’s me Gary,” Gary responded. For moment he looked as if I knew his name and forgot, and now fell offended.
“I’m not playing dumb nor acting dumb. For the millionth time I am not Ronnie,” I complained. I pushed Gary out of my way as hard as I could and got him out of my way. I ran upstairs. I heard Gary yell to Rick to go get me. I ran to my room and locked the doors. I got out my cell phone and tried to call 911, but no signal.
“Come on,” I was pacing back and forth. I should’ve stalled more time. I could’ve come up with a plan. I moved my clothing chest in front of the door. I started pacing again not knowing what to do. Then I heard pounding on my door. I looked at my window and opened it. The cool breezy wind blew across my face. I looked down.
“We know you are in there Ronnie,” Gary yelled.
I pulled my legs over the window seal.
Thanks for the suggestions and I agree with you.
I’ve rewritten the first paragraph just to show you how you could make it better, Please don’t copy word for word.
How could my family just bail?, I thought, as I stood outside. The night was cool, much colder than summer should be, and it wasn’t helping my mood. I lowered myself onto the dirty sidewalk and began to cry. Why must this happen to me? What did I do wrong? I should have broken the fight, but I had been acting like a coward.
It was then I heard a car engine. Who could it be? I wondered if it was Ronnie, but that was impossible. She wouldn’t come back. For a moment, wishful thinking got the best of me, and a believed it was Henry, but as it drew nearer I saw that it was an unfamiliar truck. It sped towards me and I followed my instinct to run to the house. However, two large men were already on my heels.
You obviously have some serious writing talent, it just needs some polishing. Good luck. 
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Buttercup, it’s call senility. Give the old geezer a break. When he says he can’t recall saying something, he really can’t. It was diagnosed in 1976 so it’s a pre-existing condition.
I tried to buy a house when he was President. 18% intrest.
Yes… I used to respect Carter as a man even though I though thought he was the worst President. Now I just think hes a nut case.
You mean he was once in the shallow end? When was that?