Q&A: Which story plot would you be more likely to read?

1. Set in a fantasy world, with dragons, elves, wizards/witches/, and for those who aren’t lucky, mortals. Two forces (Sun and Moon) are battling for power. The force of the sun is down to one lonely survivor, but she doesn’t know who she is. The force of the moon is in hiding, their leader turned into a horse so that he wouldn’t be found. Now the moon force knows that all they have to do is defeat the sun and recruit the true heir to their throne. These would be the main characters. They are best friends, and inseparable. When they find out about what they are wanted for, they run away. But eventually, they are caught. An agreement is made that they must duel, and the winner’s side wins. But they each have an item of power (i think for the sun, a necklace and for the moon, a ring) and when they take it off, they cannot be turned against each other. So, when the sun character is about to die, the moon character’s ring is pulled off by his other best friend, and it ends happily (i know, i know, a little cheesy)

2.Same settin as plot 1. But… The ruler is a total tyrant, very powerful, and nearly everybody wants him desetroyed. He lives on a distant island from the mainland, to protect himself. It is said that the island defense is impenetrable. But three main characters (probably about 17 years old) go on a quest to destroy him. They steal his crown, his only source of true power. Otherwise, he is just a normal mortal. They are then chased through the palace into the complex maze of underground tunnels, and captured. The crown is destroyed but one of the main characters is killed by a sea monster.

PLEASE do not steal my ideas, just tell me which one you would more likely read. Thank you!
For the second plot, the reason he rules form the island is because if he was on the mainland, people would come after him and tear down the palace, etc.
Maybe I’ll write them both???

I’m 13 and am experimenting with writing a book. Its about a girl leaving alone in a dangerous post- apocalyptic world filled with vampire/zombies-like creatures.

Buildings drained of color lay in heaps of useless metal snippets. The most famous skyscrapers were now nothing more than a nuisance to the survivors of the great apocalyptic disaster. The color of the whole country, and probably the world, was a like a rainy day without the promise of a rainbow or sunshine in the future. The morning sun just felt as if it was pretending to smile while all the time coping with a heart aching depression. The stars no longer mesmerized intricate souls throbbing for exploration. Alex certainty felt as though the world was miserable, because she too has been feeling like that herself recently.
As she walked alone through the once filled streets, gloom hit her like a bag full of bricks, laughing every time that she got beat and bruised. It was awful and completely daunting that she was lonely, seeing a face was rare nowadays. The only face you could see would be that of a Fuw, which would be the last thing you wanted.
Only two days ago her only allies, her parents, were eaten alive by Fuws. She had to watch the entire gruesome scene hidden, saving herself. Her parents would have wanted her to live, or else they would have died for nothing. She was completely alone. An eerie chill rolled off Alex’s back, sunk into her pores, and then settling in her bones, determined to reside there. The population rapidly decreased severely and this was known as the post-apocalyptic era.
Alex was thinking way too much, frightening her more than the crumbled city ruins. The sky overhead was changing to a deathly purplish gray, signaling the night falling. She had to get away right now, or else she would be Fuws’ dinner. She ran has hard as she could to her hideout. Fist pumping beside her and breathe coming in quick gasp, she was determined to survive.
How had she been so foolish? She had wondered off to hunt for dinner, but had only rotten her brain with endless thoughts, forcing the thought of food away from focus. The night was the only time the Fuws could come out, and they were sure to get the most of it.
Alex ran rapidly, her hideout just out of reach. She was terrified and her heart was beating faster and faster. If the Fuws didn’t get her, she was sure to have a heart attack. All the time while running, she kept thinking about her parents’ death. Would she die just like them? Would it be as gruesome? Her parents raised her to be a fighter, and that’s exactly what you had to be to survive in this era. Fight for your life. It sounds pretty harsh, but it was the most truthful statement and description of the post-apocalyptic world.
The sun now had almost disappeared, reminding Alex of the Ancient Ones magic tricks. The old trick was the disappearing act. Now you see it, now you don’t. If only they had a magic trick to keep the disaster from happening, now that would have been impressive.
A sound interrupted her thoughts, making her panicked. The ear-busting screech didn’t sound too far away. It was the blood curling scream of the most horrific creature that didn’t think twice about ripping you into shreds then making you paradise for their palate.
That’s when she saw one, running toward her with a deranged smile. She took off as fast as she could force her body. The hideout was now in her line of vision, but would she make it? Fuws are much faster than humans are. Alex turned to see the horrific creature. Its strong jaws wide open, spewing slobber into the broken cement of a ground. Its eye huge and locked on Alex, already sizing up her taste. That’s when she saw it; the hideout.
She pounced on the steel door in the ground and yanked it open. It was locked. She took her key necklace of her neck and fumbled with the key. She tried multiple times to get the key into the lock’s hole but her panic took over. It was too late anyhow. The Fuw was about a meter away. She crouched down very low, embracing for the flesh-loving creature. A scream burst out of her lungs, coming out horse. The Fuw was now a couple inches away from her face. She closed her eyes tightly and her heart raced.
She felt a sting on her neck and pain shot up rapidly. A whine came from right beside her ear and the sound of something heavy was dragging away from her. She no longer felt Fuw’s breathe on her face.

Chapter 1
The Danger
I lived in an old gray house next to a large farm. Living, and owning a farm isn’t that bad, mainly because of our garden. I, Cassandra, would run around that place pretending I was a princess with white, sparkly gowns and beautiful pearl necklaces. My crown was pure gold with sapphires on the sides, rubies in the middle, and a giant diamond on the front. (Of course it was all made of wood and chalk.)

The garden was one of the wonderful places in the world, or at least that was what I thought. The flowers were beautiful. There were red, pink, blue, and violet flowers in the garden. Also, there were several fruit trees and I loved all of them. There were also strawberries, carrots, and tomatoes. Our trees were apples, oranges, and edible berries. Once they were ripe, I would go out there and pick them all and they tasted delicious.

My mother was reading a book inside the house. My father was in the house sitting by the fire reading. My sister (Cecily) was four years of age, (Bliss) was thirteen years of age, (Amelia) was six-teen, and Claire was seven-teen. Cecily was my twin.

We were the only survivors when this happened. Our house was set on fire by lightning. The lightning struck with wreckful noise. Cecily and I were outside playing with our sticks, Bliss was running around the field and Amelia was reading her book. There were three people in our family though who died. Two were my parents, Christabelle, and Bartholomue. One though was our only brother, Auther. He was the greatest soldier I have ever seen in my life. He was strong, and brave. He was also very good with children my sisters say. I was sad about my parents as well. I barely knew them! I was only three when this happened. Bliss was the one that told me about it.

The clouds gathered, and I knew rain was coming too. So Amelia and Claire decided to go to the forest. I screamed, they ran, it was terrible. I thought I would never live through this. Amelia ran to get our brother, but Claire wouldn’t let her. She said that she would die too. The fire was large and I was afraid it would spread. (I never really knew if it was put out or not.) Amelia was holding me in her arms as she ran. Cecily was also being carried by Claire. The others ran as quick as light, especially Bliss, she had always loved running, so she practiced it often. My sisters ran until the light was gone from the fire and all the light that shone was the moon of the night. I overheard Claire and Amelia fighting over where they should go, and Bliss was exploring the woods to see if she could find someone for help. Claire finally made up her mind and told Amelia that the Castle will be a good place to stay.

We camped overnight in the dark, spooky forest. Though it was dark in the sky, the stars were not as bright as they once were at the farm. It was cloudy, so there were only a few stars out. The clouds were dark too, which made it even worse. I do know that Amelia loves looking at the sky, even if there are no stars. It was cold though, laying there with nothing to warm you. That was the worst night of my life. I was better off than my sisters though, because I was close to Bliss -who absolutely adored me; Bliss thought I was the cutest thing. So I lay there in the dark, having nothing to do but fall asleep.

On our journey the next day it was a long day. It was tiring. But we eventually reached the Castle. It was the most amazing, beautiful Castle I have ever seen. The Castle was white, with vines covering it, the air was clean, the roof was spotless, and the garden was beautiful. This was much better than the old farm.

There were four balconies, and there were points at the top covered in blue. The front of the Castle was also very beautiful. There was a fountain, with an angel in the middle, and there was water coming out of her mouth. There were two paths; both were leading to the same door. The door also had vines on it, with flowers on the vines. There were large windows that were open, and had red curtains inside blowing out the window. The door was a wide and it was a tall door with a metal doorknob. Bliss was the first to knock on the door. Cecily, Bliss, and I ran up to the door, and of course Bliss was first. For one, she was much older than me and Cecily, and another she was the fastest runner and loved to run in our family. So she had out-run us. Bliss almost knocked on the door when Amelia shouted “Wait for us!” So Bliss stood there patiently waiting for her sisters to join her in knocking on the door. Then, once they finally came down the path, and up the two steps, Bliss knocked on the door

I will have the next chapter/900 words once I finish editing it.
Please be honest when you edit it and I will take any remarks. Do not say things like “You need some work on the grammar.” Tell me what I need to fix.

*Thanks!*
Here is the next chapter of my story if you would like to read and edit it.

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